Lonely Room Lyrics – Oklahoma
Lonely Room Lyrics
The floor creaks,
The door squeaks,
There's a fieldmouse a-nibblin' on a broom.
And I set by myself
Like a cobweb on a shelf,
By myself in a lonely room.
But when there's a moon in my winder
And it slants down a beam 'cros my bed
Then the shadder of a tree starts a-dancin' on the wall
And a dream starts a-dancin' in my head.
And all the things that I wish fer
Turn out like I want them to be,
And I'm better than that Smart Aleck cowhand
Who thinks he is better'n me!
And the girl I want
Ain't afraid of my arms
And her own soft arms keep me warm.
And her long, yeller hair
Falls across my face
Jist like the rain in a storm!
The floor creaks,
The door squeaks,
And the mouse starts a-nibblin' on the broom.
And the sun flicks my eyes-
It was all a pack o' lies!
I'm awake in a lonely room...
I ain't gonna dream about her arms no more!
I ain't gonna leave her alone!
Goin' outside
Git myself a bride
Git me a womern to call m
My own.
Song Overview

Song Credits
- Artist: Alfred Drake
- Album: Oklahoma! 75th Anniversary (Track #10)
- Featured Character: Jud Fry
- Composers: Richard Rodgers (music) & Oscar Hammerstein II (song text)
- Producers: Decca Broadway team (original 1944 session), later remastered by Rodgers & Hammerstein Organization
- Original Recording Date: May 25 1944 | 75th-Anniversary CD Release: 1990
- Genre: Show tune / Broadway musical ballad
- Length: 2 min 37 sec
- Instrumentation: Full theater orchestra—murky lower strings, muted brass, woodwind whispers, timpani rolls
- Mood: Brooding, claustrophobic, yearning
- Language: English
- Label: Decca Records (MCA Classics reissue)
- Copyright © 1943, 1990 Rodgers & Hammerstein LLC
Song Meaning and Annotations

Broadway rarely pauses to let its villains monologue. Yet Lonely Room grants Jud Fry—farmhand, outsider, powder-keg—a personal spotlight. Alfred Drake delivers the number like a cracked prayer: part lullaby, part storm front. Harmonically, the piece slithers in minor thirds; Rodgers’ score lets bassoons creep while distant trumpets hiss, conjuring the cramped smokehouse where Jud broods. Hammerstein’s lines drip with rural dialect—“winder,” “shadder,” “yeller hair”—but the ache is universal: a man craving warmth in a world that snickers behind his back.
The emotional arc is brutally simple. Jud drifts from whispered observation (“The floor creaks …”) into a half-lit fantasy where the girl finally loves him. The orchestra swells; then dawn breaks, the fantasy dissolves, and his bitterness condenses into resolve. Within two minutes we move from insomnia to incipient violence. In 1943 this was scandalous: Broadway’s heroic leads sang pretty; villains usually hissed offstage. Here the bad guy sings beautifully—and that’s unsettling.
The shadder of a tree starts a-dancin’ on the wall
And a dream starts a-dancin’ in my head
Rodgers mirrors that vision with a lilting 6/8 pattern, as if Jud’s own heartbeat is lurching into a waltz. The “dancin’” motif repeats, mocking him with possibilities he’ll never touch.
And I'm better than that smart-aleck cowhand
Who thinks he is better’n me
This single couplet telescopes class resentment on the frontier. Hammerstein renders Jud’s envy without moral commentary, letting the audience squirm.
Verse Breakdown
Opening Observations
Muted strings hover on a pedal note, imitating the oppressively still air of a windowless shack. Each creak gets its own pizzicato thud.
Moonlit Fantasy
The key modulates upward a half-step—just enough to feel like oxygen—while clarinets outline the “dream” melody. Jud’s mental movie glows silver, softening his vowels. Drake stretches “yeller haaair” until time itself droops.
Reality Check
A harsh major-second clash signals sunrise. Trombones bark; the floor creaks again. Fantasy shatters. The song text snaps from “wish fer” to “pack o’ lies,” echoing Iago’s pivot from charm to malice.
Final Resolve
Drums pick up a martial two-beat; Jud vows to “git myself a bride.” It is both wedding march and threat. The curtain drops, audience breath held.
Similar Songs

- “Stars” – Philip Quast as Javert (Les Misérables)
Both pieces give the antagonist a stand-still aria beneath the night sky. Javert’s rigid devotion to law contrasts Jud’s raw loneliness, yet each man looks upward seeking cosmic endorsement. Their baritone ranges and guard-tower imagery make them dramatic cousins. - “If I Can’t Love Her” – Terrence Mann (Beauty and the Beast)
Written half-a-century later, this Disney show tune echoes Lonely Room in its waltzing melancholy and claustrophobic castle imagery. Both protagonists yearn for a woman who fears them, turning self-loathing into grand romantic lament. - “Soliloquy” – John Raitt (Carousel)
Another Rodgers & Hammerstein deep dive into flawed masculinity. Billy Bigelow swings from hope to dread as quickly as Jud, though over seven minutes instead of two. Lonely Room feels like its compressed, darker sibling.
Questions and Answers

- Why didn’t the original 1943 cast album include “Lonely Room”?
- Shellac 78 rpm discs limited running time; producers trimmed the darker numbers. The song was added on a 1944 session once LP technology allowed longer releases.
- Is Jud Fry truly a villain or a tragic figure?
- Rodgers & Hammerstein paint him as both: socially isolated, economically disadvantaged, yet capable of violence. The song’s empathy doesn’t absolve him; it complicates him.
- Did Alfred Drake ever play Jud on stage?
- No—Drake originated Curly. He recorded Jud’s solo for the album because Howard Da Silva was unavailable. Thus the same voice embodies hero and antagonist on vinyl.
- What musical techniques evoke confinement?
- A droning bass pedal, tight interval clusters, and a melody that rarely ascends beyond a sixth—all conjure cramped space. Even the lyric’s internal rhymes feel boxed-in.
- How has modern staging reinterpreted the number?
- Recent revivals dim house lights to near black, projecting grainy farmhouse interiors. Some directors accompany Jud with onstage guitar feedback, amplifying his mental static.
Awards and Chart Positions
While the individual track never charted, the 1990 Oklahoma! 75th Anniversary recording earned a Grammy nomination for Best Musical Show Album, cementing Lonely Room as a pivotal highlight cherished by cast-album devotees.
Fan and Media Reactions
“That low, growling baritone chills me every time—this is Broadway’s proto-incel anthem in the best possible sense.” @StageLeftLarry, YouTube
“Hearing Drake swap heroic Curly for menacing Jud on the same disc is mind-blowing.” @CastAlbumNerd
“The lyric ‘I’m better than that smart-aleck cowhand’ hits different in 2025—class rage, anyone?” @ModernTheatreTalk
“Rodgers’ orchestration is like a thunderstorm that never quite breaks.” @ViolaGal88
“My favorite Rodgers & Hammerstein deep cut—two minutes of pure dread.” @BroadwayBinge
Music video
Oklahoma Lyrics: Song List
- Act 1
- Overture
- Oh, What a Beautiful Morning
- Laurey's Entrance
- Surrey With the Fringe on Top
- Kansas City
- I Cain't Say No
- Many a New Day
- Many A New Day Ballet
- It's a Scandal! It's a Outrage!
- People Will Say We're in Love
- Pore Jud Is Daid
- Lonely Room
- Out of My Dreams
- Act 2
- Farmer and the Cowman
- All Er Nothin'
- People Will Say We're in Love (Reprise)
- Oklahoma!
- Finale: Oh, What A Beautiful Mornin'